Rephrase the sentences (8)

[MystOGriff]

Hi there !

Comme vous avez dû le voir, un petit jeu vous attend dans sa rubrique, pour le weekend
Ce qui ne doit pas, cependant, vous faire oublier vos devoirs !!!!
Notre ami Nobody a excellé dans la dernière série, je pense qu'il sera à la hauteur dans celle de cette semaine.
Quant à Miss Fame, que je ne vois pas le moindre ou , j'attends des propositions, ok ?
Et.... j'attends d'autres copies, naturellement !

CORRECTION : VENDREDI 26 OCTOBRE 2007
Un petit indice : il s'agit d'utiliser un MODAL dans chacune de vos phrases !


1 – The ticket inspector didn’t let us go onto the platform.
WE ......................................................................
2 – Why did you travel first class ? It wasn’t necessary, you know.
YOU ....................................................................
3 – Is it necessary to pay for my ticket now ?
DO I ...................................................
4 – Please, tell me how much luggage I am allowed to take on the plane ?
CAN ..........................................................................................
5 – Can you manage to get to the airport at 6.30 a.m ?
WILL ..................................................................
6 – If you have a reserved seat, it isn’t necessary to stand on the train.
YOU ........................................................................................
7 – I’m sure you made a mistake when you added up the total.
YOU ..............................................................................
8 – It was a mistake for me to spend so much money on records.
I .......................................................................................
9 – It isn’t possible that her car has broken down again.
HER ..................................................................
10 – In Japan, you aren’t supposed to eat food as you walk down the street.
YOU .....................................................................................


Cheer up, my friends !

MystO'Griff
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[Nobody]

Hi there!

Here is my try...

1. We mustn't go onto the platform without ticket.
2. You needn't travel first class.
3. Do I need to pay for my ticket now?
4. Can you tell me how much luggage I am allowed to take on the plane, please?
5. Will you be able to get at the airport at 6.30 am?
6. You needn't stand on the train if you have a reserved seat.
7. You must have made a mistake when you addede the total.
8. I shouldn't have spent so much money on records.
9. Her car can't have broken again.
10. You shouldn't eat food in Japan as you walk down the street.

Mais si, mais si... c'est possible de faire (beaucoup) de fautes dans un tel exercice...

Merci de tes encouragements ma chère MystO'

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[MystOGriff]

Hi everybody !

C'est aujourd'hui la correction, et comme seul notre ami Nobody a rendu sa copie, avec en vérité peu de fautes, je le rassure tout de suite , je laisse passer le weekend pour vous laisser réfléchir !

Mais.... lundi, je reviens voir !

See you !

MystO'Griff
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Learn as if you were to live forever.

[Nobody]

Wep... "fautes" est au pluriel... or je suis complètement lessivé par ma semaine de labeur... les yeux me piquent, je vous jure... Réfléchir ? je ne peux pas avant quelques repos... Seule consolation ; je vais dormir une heure de plus pour pouvoir peut-être réfléchir plus... demain...
Non, 'y a plus personne dans ma pauvre carcasse... j'ai même pas trouvé assez d'énergie pour participer à l'exercice de Fame...

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[MystOGriff]

Hi everybody !

Eh bien, une seule copie, mais de qualité ! Eh oui mon cher Nobody, je suis certaine que l'énergie va revenir quand tu vas lire la correction qui te confirmera les erreurs minimes que tu as faites .

Pour ceux et celles qui n'ont pas osé se lancer, je répète que ce type d'exercice est pourtant bien utile dans le but de trouver rapidement une formulation pour ce que l'on souhaite exprimer.

Voici donc la correction, avec un grand bravo à notre ami Nobody !

1 – The ticket inspector didn’t let us go onto the platform.
WE couldn’t go/weren’t allowed to go onto the platform by the ticket inspector.
2 – Why did you travel first class ? It wasn’t necessary, you know.
YOU needn’t have/shouldn’t have travelled first class.
3 – Is it necessary to pay for my ticket now ?
DO I have to pay for my ticket now ?
4 – Please, tell me how much luggage I am allowed to take on the plane ?
CAN you tell me how much luggage I am allowed to/I can take on the plane ?
5 – Can you manage to get to the airport at 6.30 a.m ?
WILL you be able to get to the airport at 6.30 a.m ?
6 – If you have a reserved seat, it isn’t necessary to stand on the train.
YOU needn’t stand/won’t have to stand on the train if you have a reserved seat.
7 – I’m sure you made a mistake when you added up the total.
YOU must have made a mistake when you added up the total.
8 – It was a mistake for me to spend so much money on records.
I shoudn’t have spent so much money on records.
9 – It isn’t possible that her car has broken down again.
HER car can’t have broken down again.
10 – In Japan, you aren’t supposed to eat food as you walk down the street.
YOU shouldn’t eat food as you walk down the street in Japan.


See you soon !

MystO'Griff
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Live as if you were to die tomorrow
Learn as if you were to live forever.

[Nobody]

And the winner is....
Thanking you my dear MystOgriff

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My lovely wife, my children and my cute dog are my sunshines.